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A Poor Presentation Regarding Weah’s ECOWAS Absence

A Poor Presentation Regarding Weah’s ECOWAS Absence

The Editor,

I have read your news daily and have notice that your institution is sometimes sentimental in providing information accurately, balance and clearly.

Notwithstanding, i do believe that in presenting information, you need to be very careful and prevent taking side.

Present the news always from the second and third person point of view instead of presenting like opposition or like you on the other side of the story. case study is your recent new on Amb Sen George Weah being an absentee at the ECOWAS session.

This was how you referred to the Amb.''Senator Weah is noted for notoriously abandoning sessions at the regional parliament''.

Regardless of who wrote the story, you need to edit those stories because it appears directly from your paper and when someone is quoting, they will use your entity as a source of their information.

This is totally wrong and reduces your numbers of readers that read your story. Learn to balance your news and stop writing like a political news writer. 

Mobutu Vlah Nyenpan, Jr
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